Showing posts with label young adult. Show all posts
Showing posts with label young adult. Show all posts

Friday, April 23, 2021

Review: Borrowed Time

 


Borrowed Time
by Rita Durrett

Review by Sharon Worthey

 

Borrowed Time was a fun journey back to 1969 where high school junior Sabrina finds herself trying to figure out exactly who she is and why she can’t remember anything about her life or how, covered in bruises, she ended up in a town. Only Bobby seems familiar - except he belongs to Jill, and she isn’t sharing. Bobby might have a mind of his own, however.

            Back home in the present, her boyfriend, Camden, and her parents are desperate to help her recover from the car accident that sent her back in time, but doctors warn that she may never awaken from the coma. As Sabrina’s body heals in the present, her 1969 self falls in love with Bobby while her friends help her adjust to a life before the moon landing or AC in classrooms.  
            Will Sabrina’s growing love for Bobby trigger her memories of Camden? Of course, being in love with two men at the same time creates its own dilemma. If she is able to one day return to her own time, will she even want to return? And if she should stay with Bobby, does that mean she remains in the coma forever? You’ll need to read this book to find out. As with all good books – watch for a lovely twist at the end.

 

            Borrowed Time can be found on https://4rvpublishing.com/rita-durrett, through bookstores, or from other online stores.

Wednesday, July 11, 2018

My 4RV Favorites

When searching for a publisher for your work, it's important to get to know them; see what they publish, read some of their books, figure out how your work might fit. I followed 4RV Publishing for years before I sent them my manuscript that became A Christmas Kindness. This gave me a chance to review several of  their titles. Here are a few of my favorites.


Eighth grade starts out the same as every other year for Breeze Brannigan. Then she meets Cam, the new boy in school whospeaks with an accent and must be from another planet, for none of the earthling boys she knows are so polite. He also has a secret, a secret that could mean life or death for Cam and his mother and that Breeze must help him keep.


For months, Breeze Brannigan has heard nothing from Cam, the prince she met at school and who disappeared one night without telling her goodbye. The night she graduates from middle school, however, he contacts her and invites her to visit Isla del Fuego, his home. Who could refuse such an invitation?

Breeze, along with her whole family and best friends, Amy and Allison, soon sail to the island, where she and Cam renew their friendship. But, danger lurks; a legend comes to life; and Breeze finds herself in the middle of a battle that can have only one winner.


Which has the better chance of helping, a wish or a prayer?


Joseph and his wife, Mary, expect a baby. With all that is happening, including the government requiring a census, Joseph feels a little overwhelmed and a bit left out of the preparations for the baby. Is there something he can do?



Cheryl C. Malandrinos is a freelance writer and editor. She is the author of Little Shepherd, A Christmas Kindness, Macaroni and Cheese for Thanksgiving and the recently released, Amos Faces His Bully. A blogger and book reviewer, she lives in Massachusetts with her husband and two daughters. She also has a son who is married. Visit Cheryl online at http://ccmalandrinos.com and her children’s book blog at https://childrensandteensbookconnection.wordpress.com

Saturday, February 27, 2016

Writing for a Younger Audience

By: Stephanie Burkhart 

Question: I’m confused! Is my story a children’s story, middle grade (MG) , young adult, (YA) or new adult (NA?)

Answer: Here’s the target age for the following: children’s stories: 3-7 years old, middle grade: 8-12 years old, young adult: 13-18 years old, and new adult: 18-30 years old. 

Question: So what’s the difference between middle grade and young adult?

Answer: In middle grade stories, a protagonist usually deals with rites of passage and first times. Voice is so important in these stories, so it’s essential to capture the voice of a young protagonist with believability.

In young adult stories our protagonist will be a bit more introspective and possess a little more sophistication. Again, voice is key here. When a story’s narrator sounds like an adult and not a youth, then the story loses credibility. 

Question: What type of stories appeal to a younger audience?

Answer: Something unique and diverse. The world is full of different cultures and ethnicities. There’s different abilities, different socio-economics and unique settings. Our younger readers know the world is full of vast cultures and unique people so bring that out in your writing.

Consider that deceased parents, spunky heroines, and dystopias have flood the recent market. Consider a different spin or a different approach.
When writing for a younger audience consider the following: #1: the narrator’s voice must sound like a young person, not an adult. #2: dialogue must not be too stiff or frequent. It must sound authentic. #3: No information dumps. Show! Don’t tell everything to the reader in the first 30 pages. Unravel the story slowly and savor the discovery. 

Reference: Writer’s Digest, MAR/APR 2016, “4 on 4,” complied by Jessica Strawser, pages 28-29.
Question: Good, well written, young adult also appeals to the adult audience. Think Harry Potter, Hunger Games, and the Maze Runner. Who was your favorite character in the Harry Potter Series?  Why?

Author Bio: Stephanie Burkhart is a 911 dispatcher for LAPD. She enjoys coffee, adores chocolate, and is a Den Leader for her son’s Cub Scout den. Her books with 4RV Publishing include: The Giving Meadow, Brady’s Lost Blanket, Joseph’s Cradle, and First Flag of New Hampshire.
THE GIVING MEADOW:

Caterpillar travels through a meadow learning how to care and share. 
REVIEWS: 
5 Stars, Tami Dee, Amazon Reviewer:  The Giving Meadow is a charming story about friendship, generosity, kindness, and support when changes occur which are out of our control.

5 Stars, Katherine Boyer, Amazon Reviewer:  The lessons depicted in this lovely, brightly illustrated book include, but are not limited to, sharing, friendship, acceptance, understanding and generosity.

5 stars, Beverly Stowe McClure, Amazon Reviewer:The Giving Meadow is a nice book to add to a child's library. Early childhood and kindergarten teachers could use this book in their classes as a fun read to teach children about the small creatures in their world. I recommend this book for little ones ages 4-8, for animal lovers, even the crawly kind, and for everyone who enjoys nature and a gentle read at bedtime. 

BUY LINKS:
AMAZON http://amzn.com/B00J3FBY9Y
B&N:http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-giving-meadow-stephanie-burkhart/1022481362?ean=9780982588697
PUBISHER'S LINK: http://www.4rvpublishingcatalog.com/burkhart.php

Wednesday, August 13, 2014

Writing a realistic BFF

What were you afraid of as a kid?
Hot tears bubbled into my child’s eyes when the minivan pulled into the preschool parking lot. Like a caged animal, Erica usually strained against the straps of her car seat to be released. Erica LOVED preschool, from the dress-up corner to snack time to the hamster named Peanut to chasing boys around the playground. On this bright morning, however, my three year old was kicking and holding onto the straps for dear life.

           
A lioness could not have been more proud of her cub’s attack; but where was the danger? I braved a few bruises to lean in and heard Erica mutter about a leopard at school. Today. What?!? Dashing to the entrance, I grabbed Mrs. “B”, the head teacher. “Erica won’t get out of the car. She thinks a leopard is at school?!?”

Dawning comprehension lit Mrs. B’s face as she kept pace with me, running back to the car. “Not leopard, a leprechaun!” she panted out. “Today . . . St. Patrick’s Day . . . promised the kids . . . leprechaun visit . . . puppet show . . . Oh my, I forgot.”

Puppets. That explained it. The only other bad day for Erica at preschool had been when a firefighter used puppets to explain fire safety. To say puppets freaked out my child would be an understatement. As only good teachers can do, Mrs. B quickly transformed Erica back into my happy child who skipped into school holding her hand with a promise she could sit next to her backstage to see how the show worked. She came home raving about being brave to stick her hand in a puppet.        

Does it matter now?
It isn’t St. Patrick’s Day and Erica isn’t three anymore, but sixteen—to this day a fan of the stage and NOT puppets. When writing for older kids, it is time consuming but worthwhile to create a back story for each character including a made-up childhood. Each tidbit might not make it into the book, but you will draw from the well to write a richer story.  School stories abound—easily put down, easily forgotten—with stereotypical bullies, team defeats, unbending teachers and catty friendships. To help you write a book worth re-reading, develop characterizations that include fears, secrets, and giddy joys left over from childhood. In the classic book The Secret Garden, the invalid Colin irrationally believed from a young age he was doomed to suffer a crooked back, coloring the household’s treatment of him for years.

Create a realistic BFF!

When I write middle grade fiction, I worry about creating realistic friendships. Imagine the emotional, weighty moment between teen friends when they discover something uniquely shared between them from childhood: a favorite song, amusement park ride, unusual color, a worst nightmare, a special toy. My father-in-law and stepmother share a birthday on Valentine’s Day, a fun discovery bonding two people from different countries. Once, while visiting a friend’s home, tears filled my eyes when I noticed a teddy bear identical to one I had loved and lost decades ago.
·       Do you have a childhood fear or passion that lingers to teen/adulthood?

·       Have you worked it into your writing via characterization, symbolism, flashback?

Sunday, April 21, 2013

Writing Children’s Books: Genre Differences P2

Writing Children’s Books:

Genre Differences Part Two

By Karen Cioffi

Part One of this two-part article discussed books for babies, toddlers, and preschoolers: Bedtime Stories, Board Books, and Picture Books. If you haven’t read it yet, please CLICK HERE.

Part Two moves on to school age children.

Chapter books for the 6 - 9 or 7 – 10 year old group: Children in this group are learning to read. The vocabulary and storyline is expanding, but clarity is still a must. These books may be labeled as ‘early readers’ or ‘easy readers’ by educational publishers and are designed to be read by the child. The word count is usually between 5,000 and 12,000.

An example of a chapter book is Clarice Bean, That's Me by Lauren Child, another is Because of Winn-Dixie by Kate DiCamillo.

In regard to Because of Winn-Dixie, the protagonist is ten years old. Since children tend to read-up (the protagonist will be 2 – 3 years older than the reader), the target audience is around 7 – 8 years old, placing it within this genre and possibly the younger end of middle grade.

Middle grade books: The middle grader is between 8 and twelve years old. The middle-grader will go for stories that he can associate with and characters he can form a bond with. The word count is usually a minimum of 20,000.

As the child is able to comprehend more and is maturing, so should the stories. Stories and conflict can be more involved and you can now introduce more than one protagonist or point of view. This age group can also be introduced to science fiction, fantasy, and mysteries.

An example of a middle grade book is Walking Through Walls by Karen Cioffi. The early Harry Potter books by J. K. Rowling are also middle-graders.

Young adult books: This genre encompasses the twelve to sixteen and up age group. YAs can be edgy; plots and characters can be complex and serious issues addressed.

An example of a young adult book is An Audience for Einstein by Mark Wakely. The Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer is also in the YA genre.

A useful way to get a better idea of what the different genres consist of is to visit your local library and talk to the children’s section librarian. She’ll be able to show you books in each genre and give you tidbits of information on which are the most popular, which are classic, and much more.

One final note here, each publisher will have his own criteria for categorizing a book and its minimum and maximum page length within a category.

What are your favorite books within these categories?

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Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Promotion: Review of Just Breeze -- The Midwest Book Review

posted by Vivian Zabel 

         Appearing on "Katherine' Bookshelf," in The Midwest Book Review for October, is Just Breeze by Beverly Stowe McClure . 
Just Breeze
Beverly Stowe McClure
4RV Publishing LLC
PO Box 6482, Edmond, OK 73083
9780984070824, $15.99

Who would want to go through life with a name like Breeze? Breeze Brannigan had no choice and her looks and personality as described by Beverly Stowe McClure in Just Breeze complement that name. This contemporary novel tells just what it is like for eighth graders through the interactions of the major characters, Amy, Cam, Tony, Allison, Sara and Noah. There are also the wise parents and other adults who are not averse to meting out sage advice to the 'harem scarem' teens.

The story centers on Breeze and her relationship with the 'new boy in town'.

"But I barely heard Tony, for standing behind was this boy I'd never seen, an average-looking guy. Not take your breath away handsome, but surprise, surprise, he was as tall as me. Correction, his spiky-like hair was as tall as me. His eyes struck me at nose level."

There are the usual teenage angst scenes as well as the interesting revelations. She is attracted to him, but has to wonder about him. Why does he like her? Or does he? Where is he from? Is he an alien? All of these questions and more are asked and answered in this rousing book. You will have to read this book to follow the metamorphosis of Breeze and her friends as they begin to grow up.

Beverly Stowe McClure lives in Texas with her husband, Jack. She is a mother to three sons, grandmother to four granddaughters and two grandsons and great grandmother to one great grandson. Her official bio says she married very young.

Beverly is a member of both the North Texas and the national Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators.


Katherine Boyer
Reviewer
  
          Just Breeze is now part of the holiday sale found on the 4RV Bookstore.


4RV Publishing website         

Friday, April 1, 2011

What Questions Must be Asked & Answered, Before Creating an MG/YA Book Cover?

Part 2
by Aidana WillowRaven

In my first post on this topic, I touched on the fact that basic cover design rules tend to remain the same from cover to cover, title to title, genre to genre. But we need to remember there are some important differences, too.

To repeat the opening paragraph from part one of this topic: When contemplating what is needed for the cover of any given book, some basic rules apply to every design or composition. You need to know what the title is saying. You need to know what the title isn't saying. And you need to know to whom the author is saying or not saying the title.

Last week, I started my example using an Easy Reader cover. Today, I'll be showcasing an MG/YA (middle grade, sometimes also considered "tween"/young adult), in my example. Let's ask the same questions with an MG/YA cover I designed.

What is the title saying? What isn't the title saying? Who is the author saying it to? (I’ll be using 4RV Publishing’s Just Breeze by Beverly Stowe McClure, for the example).
 


What is the title saying? Just Breeze, hmmm. 'Just' anything hints to the idea of commonness, normalcy, nothing special or extraordinary. But, would there even be a book about something that was 'just' anything? Especially a breeze? Regardless of what the story is about, it needs to be, well, 'just' a cover. So, I kept the background plain. But how do I make a plain background interesting? I decided to position the character in an unusual pose and have her acting bored or distracted. It makes the viewer want to know what she is thinking about. It gives them a reason to open the cover and look inside. I even have her eyes leading the viewer towards the opening edge of the cover.

What isn't the title saying? Here is where little hints about the story comes in. But unlike with the children's book I discussed last week, where the only real hint was the giraffes, there are several hints about what is to be discovered inside. This is targeting an older audience, 10 to 14-year-old’s. It needs to be a little more complex, while still remaining simple, or 'just.' Breeze is really the main character’s name. The story isn't about a type of light wind at all. It's about Breeze, the girl. So naturally, she has to be included on the cover. In order to maintain that lonesomeness, or singleness that 'just' implies, I drew only her. Not her friends or family. I also used a font similar to varsity or junior varsity lettering to show a lot of her life and self image revolves around school and her friendships.

To whom is the author saying the title to? As I mentioned above, the book is targeting 10-14-year- old’s. More importantly, the book is targeting girls. Girls who feel 'just' anything. Just plain, or awkward, or too tall, or too short, or .. well … just about every 10-14-year-old girl out there. They feel alone; they feel isolated; they feel plain. Breeze thinks her hair is too wild, too red. So the hair was a major element that needed close consideration. Breeze wears braces, braces with blue rubber-bands (which also matches her blue finger and toe nail polish). She's different. But the final hint about the story is that she's gorgeous! I didn't draw an awkward, gangly, pimply, messy-haired kid. I drew her precisely how everybody else sees her, but herself. She's beautiful. That is the most important part in the portrayal of her character.

Next week, we'll look at a more advanced read/genre, a mainstream novel. (I’ll be using 4RV Publishing’s Stolen by Vivian Gilbert Zabel, for the example).


Art Director & VP of Operations
4RV Publishing

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

The newest releases from 4RV

4RV has released several books in the past four and a half months. Let's begin with November and work our way to the present. More releases will be announced in the following weeks and months.

Stolen by Vivian Gilbert Zabel, cover by Aidana WillowRaven

When the joy is ruthlessly ripped from Torri’s life, she has two choices: dwell in torment and regret, or pick up the pieces and live. A nightmare invades her world, leaving her battered and torn: Her children are stolen.
Paperback: 200 pages
Published: November 1, 2010
Language: English
ISBN-13: 978-0982588642


May be bought from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website


Dogsled Dreams by Terry Lynn Johnson, cover by Aidana WillowRaven

Twelve-year-old Rebecca dreams of becoming a famous dog sled racer. She’s an inventive but self-doubting musher who tackles freezing blizzards, wild animal attacks, puppy training, and flying poo missiles. All of her challenges, though, seem easier than living up to the dogs’ trust in her abilities.
Reading level: Ages 9-15
Paperback: 148 pages
Published: December 8, 2010
Language: English
ISBN-13: 978-0982642344
May be purchased from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website.

Libby the Odd Squirrel by Lea Schizas,
illustrated by Stephen Macquignon

 Libby was different so wasn’t allowed with
“normal” squirrels. Bullying in animaldom.
Reading level: Ages 4 - 8
Paperback: 32 pages
Published: January 24, 2011
Language: English
ISBN-13: 978-0982642368

May be purchased  from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website.

 Priscilla Holmes and the Case of the Glass Slipper by John Lance, illustrated by Diana Navarro

Priscilla takes on a baffling case, the missing glass slipper.
Paperback:
24 pages
Publisher:
4RV Publishing (February 15, 2011)
Language:
English
ISBN-13:
978-0982659496


May be purchased from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website.


Stork Musters & Critter Clusters by Rena Jones
illustrated by Nikki Boetger 

Twenty-one more animal clusters, book 2 of 3.
Reading level: Ages 6-12
Paperback: 28 pages
Publisher: January 19, 2011
Language: English
ISBN-13: 978-0982642351


May be purchased from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website.

Dylan's Tale by Harry Porter (Brian Porter), illustrated by Mandy Hedrick

The second in the series about Harry’s rescue dogs.
Reading level: Ages 8-12
Paperback: 52 pages
Published: February 15, 2011
Language: English
ISBN-13: 978-0982834619

Can be purchased from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website.

Aldric & Anneliese by Harry E. Gilleland, Jr., cover by Aidana WillowRaven

Aldric & Anneliese is a tale of nation
building, kings, knights, fair ladies, battles
won and lost, triumph, betrayal, tragedy,
revenge, redemption, and great loves It is a story for the ages.
Paperback: 164 pages
Published: February 5, 2011
Language: English
ISBN-13: 978-0982659403

May be Purchased from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website

Conscience: Breaching Social Amnesia by vohoae, cover by Aidana WillowRaven

Conscience: Breaching Social Amnesia is vehoae’s first of a series that draws parallels between European invader’s personal perspectives and motivaitons and professional decisions to subjugate and exterminate “heathen red-skinned impediments.” Having a profound appreciation for nonrevisionist history, vehoae provides primary document details typically avoided in favor of political correctness.
Paperback: 216 pages
Published: January 27, 2011
Language: English
                                     ISBN-13: 978-0982642382
May be purchased from 4RV Publishing Catalog or 4RV Publishing website.

Watch for new releases as they become available.