Showing posts with label editor. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editor. Show all posts

Thursday, June 6, 2019

4RV Editor Honored for Her Poetry

Barbara Ehrentreu presenting her poetry



            Long Island, New York, is the birthday place of Walt Whitman and the home of Local Gems Press, which hosted the Walt Whitman Bicentennial - a celebration of poetry, in the town of Hauppauge. Part of the celebration was the release of Poets to Come, a compilation of poetry from poets around the country.


            Barbara Ehrentreu read her poem “Down the Path of My Memories,” from the anthology, on Sunday of the convention. Ehrentreu stated:

Yesterday afternoon, the last day of the conference, 
I read my poem from the Walt Whitman Bicentennial anthology titled: Poets to Come. Several other poets 
read theirs as well. I am very honored to be with this 
talented group of poets.


            Barbara Ehrentreu, from Stamford, Connecticut, has been an editor for 4RV Publishing since 2010. 4RV doesn't publish poetry, but the company realizes the value of poetry and has many authors, illustrators, and staff members who write  poetry.

             Congratulations, Barbara.

Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Now, "That's a baby!"





by Ginger Nielson

When we were growing up we usually lived in a neighborhood.  The houses were close enough that families got to know one another, did a fair amount of visiting, and shared their joys and concerns with one another. We shared the chaos of growing families.


Because our homes were often very close to our neighbors' we knew what was going on in their homes and the homes of their friends.  Every time a new baby was born into the neighborhood the new moms would come visiting to show off their little ones.

After all the waiting and anticipation the new  babies were paraded up and down the street to each home for inspection.  Everyone loved seeing the new babies.  Mothers had them dressed in their cutest pink or blue outfits and the hair, if they had any, was swept up into a cwepie doll curl.  The ooos and the ahhs were expected responses.

Just the same, there were times, when we children could not exactly agree that these newcomers were worth all the oooing and ahhing.  Some of them were not at all as beautiful in those early visits as they might eventually become. But, let's face it. Not all babies show their potential in the beginning.  Squish-  faced, red blotched, bald headed, toothless, crying little creatures are not at their best.


When our mother cautioned us to be nice and not say anything unkind, we had to ask for guidance.  How can you say an ugly baby is "Oh so beautiful" and really mean it when you don't.

Our sweet mother borrowed a line from a current comedian and told us just to say, "Now, that's a baby!"
It seemed to fit the occasion more than once.

Why this story?

It seems that some writers and artists as well are like those mothers.  After waiting long months for the manuscript they created and submitted to be recognized, they have a tendency to think it is perfect.

Everyone should love it .  Right?

Only if you are one of the rare few who can produce a masterpiece in one version, could this be right.
Any manuscript needs more than one eye, more than one critique, more than what a writer might give to it in one draft.  You might even need to put it away for a month or more and come back to it with your own new view.

Editors and Art Directors have learned over years of experience how to spot the best, or what could become the best.  Once an interest has been shown your work, your foot is in the door. The advice and direction an editor is willing to give is worth the time they take to give it.  The author or artist is well advised to listen, pay attention, learn from the experts and follow the advice.   If an editor has taken the time to review and ask for changes the author or artist needs to act upon the advice.

Some criticism is definitely hard to swallow and there is a tendency to reject the comments, remove the submission and move on to another and another publisher or editor.  It sounds all too familiar, but it is a sign of the professional when the communications between editor and artist are acted upon in a positive way.  Good things come from intelligent collaboration and respect for one another.

Be aware that if your manuscript continues to go unedited by you or a professional you may constantly receive the non committal comment: "Now, that's a book!"

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Giving a pitch to an agent, editor, or publisher

by Vivian Zabel


I’ve attended several writing conferences and have not only made pitches, but I’ve also listened to pitches. Below are a few points I learned. I’m going to use the pitch I did for my newest novel Stolen as an example.

            Making a 3 minutes book pitch: I had an appointment with an agent, and as I prepared for that few minutes to “pitch” my book in a way that she would want to know more, to read it, maybe to represent it, I wrote notes and practiced my speech so that it flowed smoothly but still seemed spontaneous. 

         Knowing how to prepare and present a three-minute pitch should be a tool in an author’s selling kit, to be used for agents, editors, and public presentations.

1. Start with an attention-grabber. This is a must. If you lose the audience, whether one person or 100, at the beginning, you can’t get them back. Just as the first paragraph in a story, article, or novel must attract the reader, the first words out of your mouth must do the same. 

         I started my spiel with the statement: When life steals something important from a person, she either gives up and dies, or she finds a way to rebuild her life.

2. Don’t give a complete summary of your book. Give just enough information that the audience wants to know more. 
       
             I continued my pitch by saying, “Torri had things stolen from her life over and over including having her marriage destroyed by an unfaithful husband and losing her best friend to cancer. Each time she gathered her courage and rebuilt her life. However, when her children are taken by their biological father and not found, she didn’t know if she could continue or not, or even if she wanted to try.

         I gave a bit more information from the book. For an agent or editor, the ending for the book may be required. For a presentation to a group, the ending should not be revealed.

3. If asked, be prepared to tell why you wrote the book – be sincere and reveal who you think the intended readers are.

4. Rehearse so that you don’t ramble. You don’t want your speech to sound memorized, but you need to know the main points and the order to present them.

5. If the book is already released (which if the pitch is meant for an agent or editor, it will must not be), be sure to let the audience know where and how they can buy your book.

6. If the presentation is for a group after the book is released, be sure to take copies of the book to sell and autograph. 

         Be prepared, practice, then relax.