tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post2664928550686081438..comments2023-12-29T11:39:14.271-06:00Comments on 4RV Reading, Writing, & Art News: Deep POV (Limited Third Person)Vivian Zabelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06129178812565073972noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post-39125777296005147942014-06-11T12:56:15.512-05:002014-06-11T12:56:15.512-05:00It is a struggle, Donna, but the reader really get...It is a struggle, Donna, but the reader really gets into the book better. Good luck on your rewrites.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17406103471551171672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post-74634533128896241532014-06-09T18:36:13.794-05:002014-06-09T18:36:13.794-05:00I've been learning DPOV for the last three yea...I've been learning DPOV for the last three years. Right now I am revising romances I wrote in the 1990s to incorporate DPOV and do away with head-hopping. It's a real challenge, but readers today dislike head-hopping and expect a more compelling experience. So DPOV is what I aim for, but it's a struggle at times.<br />Donna WintersGreat Lakes Romanceshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17055787529961958644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post-35025791005748244762014-06-09T09:40:36.029-05:002014-06-09T09:40:36.029-05:00I so agree, Suzanne. Omniscient POV does show up i...I so agree, Suzanne. Omniscient POV does show up in 1st drafts. The best way is to remember to live as you write it. Don't you just love getting that absorbed in the story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17406103471551171672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post-84712952278641184272014-06-09T06:19:19.138-05:002014-06-09T06:19:19.138-05:00Thanks, Janet. Your examples point out the subtle ...Thanks, Janet. Your examples point out the subtle differences. I find that my first drafts, unfortunately, tend to lean omniscient. II focus on putting the reader into the character's shoes during the revision phase. Helpful post!Suzanne Cordatoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12456536184016933556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post-63220930353242155422014-06-08T14:43:28.162-05:002014-06-08T14:43:28.162-05:00Me, neither, Cheryl. Strange how I used to think i...Me, neither, Cheryl. Strange how I used to think it was good. Fortunately, we do learn.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17406103471551171672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2925401174378785919.post-44797922696882897262014-06-07T21:32:16.658-05:002014-06-07T21:32:16.658-05:00When I reading limited third person or first perso...When I reading limited third person or first person I realized how much I preferred deep point of view to third person omniscient. I never write in the latter. Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03470069911115912344noreply@blogger.com